After much debate!

I have settled on my pen name.  Following the KISS method, I decided on C. S. Marshall.   I really like the name C. Mars Hall. But for publicity sake, it will be easier to stick with my original pen name of many moons ago.  This will simplify my life and use of social media venues.
Slowly reading my book aloud.   Believe me, when someone suggests reading your book aloud, do it!   So far, it has made a world of difference.