Friday, August 31, 2012

What I've learned along the way

Four years ago, this month, I laid in bed wondering where I wanted my life to go.  The lack of creativity in my life made me re-evaluate my current path at the time.

Now, with my first book, I look back and realize what a trip it has been.

First, I wrote, regardless of my lack of self-trust.   My first draft was no more than a few paragraphs with weak characters and a thin plot.  I questioned my abilities and craftsmanship.   I had no formal training as a writer and no idea how the whole process worked.  At first, I decided on a single volume, but then the story grew, the cast of players expanded, and an entire sub-plot popped, then blossomed.  From there...

Second, my confidence grew.  The paragraphs, dialogue, descriptions formed into pages and chapters.  The story flowed together.  I began a self-structured coursework of reading about writing. 
  1. Stephen King's On Writing topped the list.  The best of the bunch.   King writes his autobiography, then provides a "writer's toolbox," and last, provide the basics in "look here's how to write" section.
  2. Anne Lamott's Bird By Bird offered a look at a writer's life.
  3. William Noble Show, Don't Tell: A Writer's Guide offers numerous ways of showing and telling.  The infamous "show, don't tell" haunts writers like naked pictures of the prince taunting the queen.  To this moment, I struggle with "show, don't tell."   What does it mean?   How much do I do?  Do I show everything?  
  4. Roy Peter Clark's Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer.  Love it!  Clark gets to the point in each chapter.
Third, I struggled with the actual writing.   Discipline!   I disciplines myself to write as the same time as many days possible.  I found that from 7:30 p.m. to 10ish p.m. to be the perfect time.  I found my creative peak to be the highest.

Forth, I read.  Fiction -- kids and adult.   Most of the time, I would read only a few chapters.   My mission involved looking at writer's style, composition, description.

Fifth, I did my research.  London 1886 -- what was it like?   Jack the Ripper -- what are the facts?   I read. I looked. I took notes.  I selected what would be useful and what wouldn't.   I found many great books at my local library.

Sixth, I wrote, read, revised, and repeated.   I selected seven readers who offered opinions and suggestions.

Seventh, I read the entire manuscript aloud.  From page one, word one to the last page, last word.  The whole "read-aloud" took three weeks.  IT WAS WORTH IT!   I found numerous problems, typos, grammatical errors.   I recommend taking the time to read aloud.

Eighth, I stopped.  After reading aloud, I stopped.  I said "Fini!"  Otherwise, I would continue the sixth point over and over and over...   At some point, I made up my mind that this was it.   Love for what it is right now.

Those eight points brought me to where I am today.

Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Fini!

Over the weekend, I completed reading my book aloud.   This part of the process took about three weeks.  And now, I have the pleasure to say I have finished my first book -- thirty-three chapters and just over 47,000 words.   Now, I will be starting on book two, while searching for a book cover designer for book one.

Literally, I began this journey four years ago in August.  I remember my first draft as a short story with about six paragraphs -- one paragraph per chapter.  Somehow along the path, I turned a short story into full-fleged novel... which I had planned only a single volume... but the story grew to two... then three... then into a whole organization.

Now I have two blogs, one complete book, the start of a second book, and several books ideas.

Time!  I need more time!

Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Many Happy Birthdays!

August is an important event month for me.  First, my parents would have celebrated their 60th wedding anniversary.  My grandmother's birthday is August 17 (she would be 97).  My mother's birthday was August 10 (she would be 78).   And of course, today -- August 15 -- Julia Child. 

Since I was young, Julia fascinated me.   She challenged America to learn and enjoy cooking as well as to have no fear.  Several years ago, I ate a local restaurant that gave out "fortune pull-tabs."   You pulled the tab open to reveal a quote.  My quote read "I didn't start cooking until I was 32, before that I just ate" and attributed to Julia Child.  

I relate to that quote.  To this day, it remains on my kitchen bulletin board.
I didn't start writing until I was 40, before that I just read.  Hope you don't mind Julia, but you had great influence, not just with your teaching and writing abilities, but also with your choice of words.  I aspire to live up to them.

Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Aloud!

Currently, I am reading my book aloud.  All of it.   This audible experience has been the best editing method.  I have found several grammatical errors, spelling issues, and punctuation.   On the bigger picture, I have found issues with flow, strange sentence structures, and other weird problems.
  
I highly recommend this method.  I read about it in several books on writing and editing. I cannot emphasis enough how much this has helped me.  I wished I would have read it aloud sooner.

Monday, August 6, 2012

Sailing into unfamiliar waters

When I starting writing, I never thought of all of the paths I would have to travel.   Oh no!   Just write a book...  Life will be great...   HA!  As Mark Twain or Benjamin Disraeli or whomever said -- "Lies, Damned Lies, and Statistics!" 

Right now, I am reading aloud the entire book, making any last changes.   When I finish a chapter, I say "done" and move on to the next one.  Right now, I am just over half way.  Next, the formatting process...  I have to make sure I follow Amazon's rules and Smashwords.   Amazon's format is simple.  Smashwords, which I love already, saves me from formatting for everyone else (B&N, Apple, iTunes).

Next comes getting to know the IRS...   I read about establishing an LLC, getting an EIN, opening a business banking account for any money made with my writing, filling out forms during tax season, deductibles, and non-deductibles...   Will I ever make that much money from these books?

Then, since I have decided to be an indie writer/publisher, come the marketing...  This could be fun.  I've already started this blog and one about The Time Savers Club.    I have other ideas on promotion as well.  Maybe free PDF copies of my book?   Business cards?   Parties?   The list goes on...

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